Category Archives: Historical Fiction

I haven’t been very good about updating my blog – in ‘real’ time, I am up to chapter 46, but I have been writing my summaries.

Part Two

Chapter 9 Late Summer 1960

Ellie is seventeen. She is in her final year at school. She’s popular and beautiful (her words). She’s met the boy her will become her husband.

The coup d’état in 1953 has made no difference to them.

And Homa? They did write and met twice. Ellie’s mother wouldn’t allow them in the house and it was too hard for a ten year old to go ‘downtown’. Ellie wore the necklace for three years.

Ellie is worried about Homa’s father during the coup (he is a communist).

She thinks her mother and uncle love one another.

I promised so that she’d stop lecturing more than anything else. But like the embers of a fire, her words nestled into the crevices of my body. I internalised them and grew to believe that I needed to protect what was rightfully mine. Why shouldn’t I have it all? I deserved the best.

Chapter 10 Spring 1960

This is a flashback to when Ellie met Mehrdad. They were in Year 11. It was the Iranian new year (they celebrate it on the Spring Equinox). On day 13 everyone heads to the outdoors, parks etc.

For the celebration Ellie grew lentils. Now she needs to tie the blades together, drop it in the river, and wish for a husband.

Mehrdad is at the river’s edge and they chat.

Chapter 11 1960 September

We are at Ellie’s school. There is a queen bee Afarin, Ellie wants her power.

A new student is joining the school – Homa!

Homa is the same – confident and enthusiastic. Ellie is mortified. Homa tells a rambling story about how her and Ellie are ‘bestest’ friends. Afarin loves, and following her lead, so do others. Ellie tries to leave for lunch quickly, but Homa catches up. She joins them for lunch and wins over Ellie’s friends. Ellie’s better side emerges.

Chapter 7 1953 May and June

The girls get a detention. Ellie wins ‘first in class’. There is a crowning ceremony and a lunch. She excitedly tells her mother who is calmly (icily) happy for her, but seems more interested in the fact that Ellie won’t be home for lunch.

After the crowning ceremony the girls get the afternoon off. Ellie returns unexpectedly to the house to find her mother in bed with her uncle (I thought this was going to happen).

Is the mother doing this because she thinks this is the only way she can saw Ellie?

Chapter 8 1953 June

The mother and Uncle Massoud are getting married and they are all moving ‘uptown’.

Ellie asks her mother why she accepted him when she use to say that she couldn’t stand him.

You sacrifice yourself for others.

She has to say goodbye to Homa. Homa gives her a necklace with a Homa bird pendant. Ellie gives Homa a notebook.

She is desperately unhappy about the move.

Chapter Four – October 1950

Ellie goes to Homa’s house after school. Ellie’s mother won’t have Homa in her house (I tell you this woman is awful).

Homa’s mother is lovely. Homa has a baby sister Sarah. They play hopscotch, jump rope and eat amazing pastries. Ellie wants Homa’s life, she is jealous of her.

Chapter Five – November 1950

Ellie and Homa become firm friends. Homa’s mother teaches them how to cook. At home Ellie’s mother is letting her do more cooking.

Ellie can’t understand how Homa’s family can afford so much food. It turns out that Homa’s father is the head waiter at a restaurant and he brings home the excess.

Chapter 6 May 1953

We’ve jumped in time (thankfully it was beginning to feel a bit slow). Both girls are doing well at school. They have skipped a grade.

Towards the end of the year Homa convinces Ellie to skip school. The go to the Grand Bazaar and eat ice cream and have nuts. They return for lunch at home.

Ellie’s mother knows she has skipped school – they were seen by one of the neighbours. There is a nasty argument about Homa.

[…] her father waits on people all day like a servant. Her mother is illiterate. They are vermin in the alley, my dear. They are nobodies who come from nobodies.

Ellie responds with

So the fact that you are his descendent [the qajar king] basically makes you the great-grand daughter of a whore.

Something is brewing. This chapter marks a turning point for the mother. She seems to have made a decision (is she going to marry Uncle Massoud?)